Now arguably this is part of the scene, but I do not believe this would happen in a pro establishment. When the MC realises the mistake he explains that this is not the service that he wanted, but the Dom just goes all power-trippy on him. Because of this he gets a Dom (and his assistant). Our MC pays zero attention to the consent forms and ticks a bunch of random stuff. The MC is a straight and naive boy who, having been spanked by a girlfriend and liking it, decides to go to a pro Domme. I can live with no chemistry if the sex is hot, and vice versa, but put the two together and I'm outta there.įirst up, the Dom always calls the MC "slave". The book needed an editor, for things like a character wearing jeans lifting his butt up so his shorts can be removed.īut the reason I didn't like the book is that the BDSM is completely unbelieveable, and there is zero chemistry between any of the characters. The writing itself is fine, although the present tense takes a bit of getting used to. I read the first 123 (of 400) pages, then started skipping ahead and reading chapters to see if it got better. And my opinion found it boring and dreary. This does not equate to it being a bad book this is only my opinion. But Goodreads is subjective, and I hated this book, so I'm allowed to 1-star it. I could not bring myself to finish this book (or even read very much of it) so it seems mean to rate it.
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